Changes made whilst editing By Destinni

Whilst editing we have had to make changes, in the beginning our first shots were of Monica's Dad and Rebecca mentioned to us that our first shot should be of Monica because she is the artist. So we switch round the shots and made sure Monica is in the first shot. 

We have taken Rebecca advice on board and changed the shots so that we introduce our artist 'Mons'. We believe that now we have changed the way the beginning the audience will know who the artist is and what the artist is like. I think if we didn't change it the audience watching the video might assume that Monica's Dad who was in the first shot was the artist.

Our first two shots are of Monica in two different settings before her Dad appears dancing. Which is a much better beginning and luckily Monica and her dad are both dancing to the songs beat.